Critique, well here we go: First off Compliment for her eyes, juts love them they melt true your soul <3 her mane and tail also beautiful to see, they look like starhaze wich is just amazing. not to hate on you I apsolutly love this piece of art but her wings are a little point of atention for the next time.
Version: 5 stars, its just amazing! She looks just so cute i bet nopony could not go and hug her <3
Originality: 4 Stars, its not oncommon that Luna is drawn sleeping/sleepy but no matter its still awesome!
Technique: 5 Stars, Not that I'm a real artist, I only sketch (like almost never) But I think that your Technique is amazing! Don't change anything about it!
Impact: 5 stars, The inpact it made on me is just that I just fell in love, Its such cute, beautiful and amazing (no other words for it, need to watch instead of thinking words for it!)
The Position and the expression on her face makes her look adorable enough to embrace in a warm hug. The Mane and Tail are outstandingly beautiful, too! It has to be the first thing that caught my eye when i saw the picture. I think the wings are okay, not the best, but they're okay. (Wings are hard to draw. eheh...) I will have to put Originality at 4 stars because i've seen so many pictures in a similar manor. bt i still can't help but love each and every artist's style variations and amazing talent!